IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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The letter addresses all tasks but lacks coherence and cohesion due to abrupt transitions and informal language. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, with several spelling and punctuation errors affecting clarity.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors29
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource13
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response3

Writing Task

#Holiday Plans
#Informal
You are planning a holiday with your friend. Write a letter to your friend.
Explain the destination you have chosen.
Suggest activities you can do there.
Ask for your friend's opinion on your plans.

Submitted Answer

Words169|Paragraphs5
English:UK English
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Hey Shenal,
I got this idea to go on a
vaction
. I was thinking of going to Sydney for three days. The perfect time for this would be the
easter
holidays . The rough estimate for our trip would be $3000 which could split
inbetween
us.
There are plenty of tourist destinations to
vist
.
we
could see opera house which is one of the world wonders. There are beaches to explore all around Syndey. I
aslo
saw this highly
reviewd
restaurant in the middle of the city. People who
vist
this
place
recommends food 10 out of 10 we could check this
place
out
aswell
. Most importantly I found this nice
cozy
Air BnB
place
for us for
accomadation
. The best thing
is
this
place
is not too far from the city.
so
we can so much time on travelling.
What do you think about my idea
.
Let me know
any suggestion you would
like add
. If everything is
good
I can go ahead and book tickets for us
Thanks

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