IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)

6.0
Overall Score
29 Mar 25, 10:32
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Overall Feedback

The letter effectively addresses the task with clear information about rescheduling, the new date, and changes to the menu and venue. However, there are minor grammatical errors and informal expressions that affect the overall coherence and lexical resource. Improving sentence structure and vocabulary variety could enhance the response.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors24
Grammatical range and accuracy11
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response4

Writing Task

#Event Postponement
#Informal
You were organizing a surprise dinner for your parents' anniversary but now must reschedule. Write a letter to your siblings.
Inform them about the need to reschedule
Provide the new date for the dinner
Explain any changes to the menu or venue

Submitted Answer

Words143|Paragraphs5
English:UK English
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Hey Guys,
Unfortunately it's bad news. Due to some unavoidable
reasons
the surprise
dinner
for mum and dad got to be rescheduled. Dad has already booked tickets for mum and him to go on
vacation
for their anniversary. They are going away for two
weeks
so
theywill
be back on April 20.
I already spoke to the hotel manager to
rechedule
the
dinner
to 25th
April
which is a Saturday and
time
would be same as before. Because of the
reschedule
the hotel cannot provide us the Zeus
dinner
package with the
river side
table.
Instead
they gave us the Thor
dinner
package which they set up next to pool area. As you could see on the hotel
website
the menu is slightly different
than
what we
selected
i
hope it's not a big issue.
Hope see you all soon
Ash

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