IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5

5.5
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The letter covers the main points but lacks some details and has several grammatical errors. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary and grammar range could be improved for a higher score.

Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response4.0
Total Errors18
Grammatical range and accuracy3
Lexical resource4
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response7
Question
You are planning a Halloween party at your house. Write a letter inviting your neighbor.
Describe the theme of the party.
Give details of the time and date.
Suggest some costume ideas.
#Party Invitation
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:98
Paragraphs:7
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Hey Friends,
I hope all is well and you are having a great day.
I am writing to inform you that I am inviting you to
Halloween
party at my house
and
you can bring your children to share. The
custome
theme is Game of Thrones, it would be great to
se
each people with that kind of
customes
.
It is not mandatory, you can bring food or drink that suits you. The party is October 26th at 3:00 p.m.
It would be exciting to enjoy that party. I hope to see you soon.
Best,
Diana