IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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12 Mar 25, 16:35
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is limited and informal, affecting the overall formality and clarity of the message.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Writing Task
#Congratulatory Letter
#Informal
Your best friend has recently bought a new house. Write a letter to congratulate them.
Congratulate them on their new home
Express your happiness for their achievement
Ask about their new neighborhood
Submitted Answer
Words134|Paragraphs10
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Hey Anna and Ben,
I just learning about the new house, and I would like to express my
congretes
to you guys!Enjoy it, I wish you only happy moments on it, and
let's
brings more good luck and dreams come true!In our days it's very difficult to
achive
a big gools
as yours, so I'm very happy and proud for you two.In another hand, this is a very brave and smart
initative
, that no much
couples in your age recive
it.How it's looks now that you live there? Its
cozy
?What about the new
neighborhood
, are they friendly and welcome with you? Have you intertudced
with them yet?I hope to meet and have a coffee and talk about everything together.
Have a lovely day,
Merry