IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6.5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 6.5

6.5
Overall Score
05 Aug 24, 19:16
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The letter covers all the required points and is mostly clear and coherent. However, there are some grammatical errors and the vocabulary could be more varied. The formality is slightly inconsistent, and the letter could benefit from a more structured approach.

Overall score6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy7.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors13
Grammatical range and accuracy1
Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response5
Question
You are planning a weekend getaway and want to invite your friend to join you. Write a letter to your friend.
Explain the details of the getaway (destination, dates, activities)
Express why you think they would enjoy it
Ask them to confirm if they can come
#Friend Meeting
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:98
Paragraphs:8
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hey Ana,
I'm planning a little weekend getaway to Whistler from 10th Aug to 12th Aug, and I was hoping you'd want to come!
I know how much you love hiking, wine tasting, exploring. Well, Whistler is basically a paradise for these activities . Imagine photoshoots, Parties and fun. I think it would be the perfect way to relax and recharge.
I’ve already booked a cosy cabin, a cute B&B.
Please Iet me know if you’re interested and we can start planning some fun activities!
Can’t wait to hear from you
!
Regards,
Kirti