IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6.5
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IELTS Letter Sample Band 6.5
6.5
Overall Score
02 Aug 24, 22:04
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks coherence in some parts. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied and precise. The overall structure is logical but could be better organized for clarity.
| Overall score | 6.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have an upcoming surgery and need to discuss the pre-operative instructions. Write a letter to your surgeon's office.
Mention the date of your surgery
Ask for detailed pre-operative instructions
Inquire about any special preparations or restrictions
#Doctor Appointment
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:225
Paragraphs:9
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Hello sir/madam,
My name is ADELE SHERIFAT and
i
am writing this letter regarding my surgery
for my diagnosis of acute appendicitis at your prestigious hospital taking place on the 19th of August, 2024
.I have come to terms with the fact that this
surgery
is important to make my health better
and i
would like to know how the whole operation would take place in as to prepare me further.I have been very inquisitive since
i
got this diagnosis and the need for me to have a surgery
, this has made me search online for answers but i
could not find a comphrehensive
process. I would like to know if there are any instructions for me to go through or prepare for before having my surgery
, so as to make the whole process easier for us both. I would need you to give me a well detailed explanation about these pre operative
instructions
if any, and the consequences as well.I might also add if there are any special preparations or restrictions for me to follow before coming for my
surgery
as regards to food, or extra precautions for me to take that can affect my upcoming
surgery
at your
hosipital
.
I will be glad to get enough clarification on this situation and get a reply very soon.
Thank you.
Faithfully,
Adele.