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IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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18 Sept 24, 02:15
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The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks proper punctuation. The coherence and cohesion are acceptable, but the vocabulary usage is limited and sometimes incorrect.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors29
Grammatical range and accuracy13
Lexical resource8
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response4

Writing Task

#Travel Plans
#Semi-Formal
Your friend has invited you to visit their city and stay with them for a few days. Unfortunately, you have to decline the invitation due to work commitments. Write a letter to your friend.
Thank your friend for the invitation
Explain why you cannot come
Suggest another time to visit

Submitted Answer

Words174|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hello my dear friend
I'm
writing you this letter first of all thanking you of inviting me to your house for my holidays
i
was really cheerful about going to spending time with
you
i
was already thinking our schedule for those days however in
the last minute
my boss ask me to go to Italy for convert an interview with our most influential parent
and
you know that going at Italy
its
my
depest
desire in my life and for this
reason
i
have to cancel you the invitation,
i
am really ashamed with you,
i
send you my deepest apologies
netherthless
when
i
am back here, my boss
give
me the holidays with extra days so
i
can go to visit you, we can have the
amazing
plans that we plan, in totally
i
am out of work between the 12 until the 26 of July, so tell me when you are free so we can see each other.
Again
i
am really sorry about it.
With all my love
Gabi

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