IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and coherence due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Vocabulary is limited and repetitive, affecting the overall readability and engagement of the letter.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 29 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 15 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are relocating to a new city for a better climate. Write a letter to your friend to let them know about your move.
Explain the reason for moving
Describe the new city's climate
Share your feelings about the move
#Moving Notice
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:8
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Hello my dear,
I hope you are doing well,
im
writing you
because, Do you remember when I said i
wanted to change of city besides the climate conditions in where i
live? well
, this is something a little strange
but now i
have moved.well at first, even if it was something that I
really
wanted, it was difficult to me
to make some options, or even think well what I was going to do, but you know? I really
hate knowing that I have been being something that makes my parents stressed. Therefore, they always fight due to me, and i
really
hate that so
I decide to stop being a bother.this new city is so wonderful and gorgeous, when I did my first sight I was like very surprised but after the time, I´m
really
enjoying this
, because
this type of climate from here is not hot nor neither is cold, it is the perfect match of them too, and I do
really
enjoy it, is wonderful.
At first I was scared moreover anxious
, because
it was my first time being all alone! But when I get used of
it, I look it with a different eyes
, I´m really
happy for this change, I hope to
have this same feeling forever.It would be expectant to hear some answer for you, I will wait for it!
Best wishes,
Laura