IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but has several grammatical errors and lacks a formal beginning and signature. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 30 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You mistakenly sent an insensitive message to your friend. Write an apology letter to your friend.
Explain why you sent the message
Apologize for any hurt caused
Assure them it won't happen again
#Friend Apology
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:146
Paragraphs:2
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Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hello friend!
I'm really sorry for
the message i
sent you yesterday. Let me make it clear, first i
didn't mean to send it to you. I was just overwhelmed with everything and i
couldn't hold my anger. Yesterday was such a bad day for us and i
realized that i
messed up, but that doesn't justify my action...I know
i
was wrong and i
want to apologize to you. I'm not forcing you to forgive me now
but i
want you to know that I'm really sorry
for hurting your feelings. I promise that i
won't let my emotions control me from now on
and i
'll think twice before saying anything so that this won't happen again. Once again i
'm really sorry, i
hope you'll feel better and
we can still be friends