IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)

5.5
Overall Score
01 Apr 25, 00:34
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and precision in grammar and vocabulary. Improved sentence structure and more formal language would enhance coherence and task achievement.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors23
Grammatical range and accuracy11
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion5
Task response4

Writing Task

#Product Complaint
#Formal
You bought a new digital camera that has a defective lens.
Describe the problem with the digital camera
Mention any attempts to contact customer service
Suggest a solution

Submitted Answer

Words208|Paragraphs7
English:US English
Global Issues:
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hello Sony Company Ltd,
My name is Prutha Patel, I hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter
mentioning
my concerns regarding a possible cause with the digital
camera
I recently bought online.
The
camera
had no possible wear and tear when
arrived however,
it was in a good working condition in initial days for like 3 months but
after that
it is having some glitching problem resulting in blurry with pixel images also I am not able to upload any images from the
camera
storage card to my laptop or phone.
Also, for the same
i
have tried multiple times contacting the customer service
but
they always
ask to
me to visit a Company store located nearest in the city but when I reach there with the issue they said it is not a
solveable
problem and though having a warranty for a year I should buy
other
camera
and discard this one which
i
found totally useless.
These
is
my request to please offer me
an
compensation for the
camera
that my warranty can cover or any technical team support to repair my
camera
.
I hope to hear back from the company team as soon as possible considering customer satisfaction.
Yours Truly,
Prutha Patel

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