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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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The letter addresses the task but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is limited and there is a need for better organization and clarity in expressing ideas.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 29 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Writing Task
#Team Meeting
#Semi-Formal
You were not satisfied with the outcome of the last team meeting. Write a letter to your team leader explaining your concerns and suggesting a follow-up meeting.
Mention the meeting and its outcome
Explain why you were not satisfied
Suggest a follow-up meeting
Submitted Answer
Words162|Paragraphs8
English:
Global Issues:
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Vocabulary Usage
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Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hello Mr.
Hallon
,Firstly I hope this email
find
you well!The reason
of
this email is about of a concern belong the last meeting, dated September 16, 2024 with the topic for the "Maintance of the Business". The results of that meeting were very un clear and very caotic
for all the employee
. Meanwhile
we were reading all the statistics and the list of product component
, about the new product, in the tv
was show
the new advisterment
of
it. It was a mess! Every one was unconcetrated
. We are not ready for the presentation of the product in market at Monday
.So, in conclusion, it will be very
helpuful
for us to have another meeting from another training groop
, or maybe another strategy for it. If they put a schedule, and use it,It works better.Please feel free
te
ask me for any sugestions
, or any other qustion
.Thank you in advance for your help
!
Elda Smith,
Sale Department