IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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The letter lacks grammatical accuracy and contains numerous spelling and punctuation errors, affecting clarity. While it addresses the tasks, the organization and logical flow could be improved for better coherence and cohesion.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 36 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are planning a trip with your family and have been researching different travel options. Write a letter to your friend asking for their opinion on the best travel booking sites.
Mention the destination and type of trip
Ask for their recommendations on travel booking sites
Inquire about their past experiences with these sites
#Travel Booking
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:5
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Hello Matias!
I am
writting
to express interest in the tour that you pay in your last trip with your parents and family, if
im
not wrong the destination that you decide to travel was Spain so
i
hope you can give me all the information or the contacts that
i
need to hire the same travel agency, the idea of the trip
its
to visit the most famous places in the principal cities that Spain has, and also to relax some days in the capital,
taking into account
that you already travel there
i
hope that maybe you can give some recommendation when we arrive.
I investigate a little bit about all the possible plans that the people usually do when they visit Spain but knowing that you know that place i
wanna
get you
opion
about the comments that the people says in the post of their travels, if there's the option that my parents can
talk with
yours to get more
especific
information about the travel you will do my a big
favor
.
My parents already buy the tickets we are going to fly in an
airlane
called Emirates we have listened many good
opion
about this company we arrive the next month to Barcelona when
i
arrive
i
send
u
some pictures about the country
and
we
talk about
the plan that
i
can do here
i
am waiting for your response.
Bye see you at school!