IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses all tasks but lacks coherence and cohesion, with several grammatical errors affecting clarity. Vocabulary is basic and repetitive, and the formality is inconsistent with the expected semi-formal tone.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors21
Grammatical range and accuracy5
Lexical resource7
Coherence & cohesion5
Task response4

Writing Task

#Festival Greetings
#Informal
You received a festival greeting from a friend you met during a holiday. Write a letter to thank them and share your festival experience.
Thank them for the greeting
Share your festival celebrations
Ask about their festival experiences
Suggest a future holiday meetup

Submitted Answer

Words168|Paragraphs8
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hello Friend,
I'm writing this letter to thank you for your
greetings I
received from you during the festival period in the holiday.
I thank you for your and greetings
and
I was glad to see your message you sent to me, it really made my
festival
experiences filled with love from a friend, my wife and my
family
were very excited to see your salutation you sent to me knowing you are my
child hood
friend.
My
festival
celebration was fun, I had enough
time
to spend with my
family
mostly my children, they barely know me as
i
spent most of my
time
at work.
I would like to know how my
long
time
friend
festival
celebration. I hope you and
you
family
enjoyed had good
time
together.
I would like both of our
family
to join in celebrating this same
festival
next
time
it is being hold so we can both take a break from our jobs to celebrate together.
Best regards,
Isaac Abudullai.

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