IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)

6.0
Overall Score
11 Apr 25, 07:19
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses all tasks but lacks a formal structure and contains grammatical errors. Vocabulary is basic, and coherence could be improved with better organization and transitions.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors18
Grammatical range and accuracy4
Lexical resource5
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response4

Writing Task

#Apology Letter
#Informal
You failed to return a borrowed item to your friend on time. Write an apology letter to your friend.
Explain why you didn't return the item on time.
Apologize for the delay.
Promise to return it as soon as possible.

Submitted Answer

Words100|Paragraphs1
English:UK English
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Hello Ahmad,
i
'm so sorry for the late delay
on
getting back the MP3 player that
i
borrowed last week from you when we were on the bench near Gruk Lake. It is because
i
caught flu three days ago and couldn't go outside of the house. My flu is killing me, in a bad way. I think that it might because of the dandelion that
i
sniffed that day with you. I can guarantee you after all this flu is gone
i
will return it to you directly. Maybe we can meet at campus on
lunch time
?

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