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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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12 Mar 25, 00:27
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but lacks formality and contains several grammatical errors. Coherence and cohesion are affected by informal language and abrupt transitions, while vocabulary is limited and repetitive.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response4.0
Total Errors29
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource12
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response5

Writing Task

#Recommendation Letter
#Formal
A friend of yours is applying for a leadership position and has asked for your recommendation.
Describe your relationship with your friend
Mention your friend's leadership qualities
Provide examples of their leadership in action

Submitted Answer

Words156|Paragraphs11
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Hello Aadi,
I hope you are doing well. I am pretty
sure
that you are growing great
, because
i
have known you since 2nd grade. I still remember that charm of yours
amoung
our friends group, sometime
i
miss your presence as you have motivated me at my worst.
I was very much excited about the role you are applying for ,
i
heard that from
swati
last night.
we
were
discousing
about you being
monitor
for
some
many years. I was thinking about the trip we went in 12th
standed
where you manage everything by yourself from making
sure
about these things;
1) Destination
2)
trvelling
enjoyment
3)providing food
4) Help everyone to understand the trip plan
5) making
sure
everone
is safe and returned home safe too.
I am very
sure
that you will
quallify
for this role
and
you will
definately
crack this job and shine like you always had.
yours loving
Maninder

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