IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
14 Jul 24, 06:06
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Overall Feedback
The response addresses the task but has several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the letter could be more logically organized. Vocabulary is appropriate but not varied enough for a higher score.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You recently bought a laptop from an online store. Unfortunately, it has several issues that you want to be resolved.
Describe the issues with the laptop
Explain what you have done to try to resolve the issues
State what you expect the company to do
#Product Complaint
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:165
Paragraphs:6
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Greetings. I hope this E-Mail finds you healthy and well.
Recently, I have bought a laptop from an online store, namely 'Store B'.
I had expected it to come unscathed and with little to no
issue
whatsoever, unfortunately, after opening the package and turning the device on, the touchpad's sensitivity
wasn't
working very well like how it was intended to, as well as the LCD screen being unclear and blurry.
I have tried to resolve these
issues
by restarting the laptop multiple times, wiping the screen clear if it were because of dust or any other particles,
but yet
my
issues
still remain the same just
like
the first time I had gotten my hands on it.
Do
please
give me an advice
or suggestion to fix
the issues
I have with my laptop. If nothing cannot salvage the issues
im
currently having with my device, I will then request a refund through a different E-Mail. Thank you.Regards,
Leon Kennedy