IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. Vocabulary is basic, and coherence could be improved with better organization and transitions.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You have received an invitation to a conference on mental health awareness. Write a letter to the event's organizing committee.
Acknowledge the invitation
Express your interest in attending
Inquire about the interactive sessions and activities planned
#Conference Invitation
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Good morning, Sir/Madam
I'm
writing this letter to acknowledge your invitation to a mental health awareness conference that was scheduled on
next week, precisely on Saturday at 9 AM. I really
appreciate your kindnesses to give me an opportunity for attending this conference.Mental health awareness always
being
one of the most exciting field
that I would like to learn. A lot of advantages I could gain that can be very beneficial for me which will keep me resilient in every problem I will face in future
. With this confernce
, I will have many chances to learn from each other about ourselves troubles and the solutions which can expand my knowledge to solve my future difficulties.Lastly, I would like to confirm if that true there will be an interactive sessions and
activites
such as Question and Answers sessions, workshop, bazaar, and others? If so, how long it will be held and how many question
I could have to ask?Perhaps, that is all from me
and
Thank you very much for this big opportunityBest regards, A.