IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
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The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 22 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are organizing a charity event next month, but due to unforeseen circumstances, you need to postpone it. Write a letter to the participants informing them about the postponement.
Explain the reason for the postponement
Provide the new date for the event
Offer options for refund or keeping the ticket for the new date
#Event Postponement
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:272
Paragraphs:5
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Good morning, Participants
I am Edeline ,as a representative of Standford student council, want to inform you that our charity
event
will be postponed due to the bad weather for some
couple of days. Because of the unpredictable condition, we don't
get any permissions from our school to hold the event
next month. But, we will promise you that all participants are going to receive some money
more than it stated in the pamflet
before. To gain those
money
, please attend our event
on July 30th at 12 pm . It is suggested to bring the booked ticket. If you may not like to come, we will mind to refund
the ticket with the amount of money
as much as you deserve. Here are the steps for you to get the
money
back
. First, you must to
go to link www.moneyback.com. After that, you login
with a your
registered email. Next, choose "Standford charity event
" on the top bar of the website. Later on, you will be directed to a dialogue box with an input bar on the bottom. In this step, you may enter your ID ticket with capital letters. After you enter correctly, you may click "next" to know for the next information
. In the next information
, you will know the time to get the money
. The important thing is you have to keep the information
that is mentioned in the screen because it becomes the evidence that have to be seen by our team.For more
information
, you may check our website. Sorry for the inconvinience
. Thank you for your attention.Representative of Standford Student Council
Edeline