IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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11 Apr 25, 04:06
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses all bullet points but lacks formality and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a more formal tone would enhance the overall quality, while a wider range of vocabulary would strengthen the lexical resource score.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors29
Grammatical range and accuracy15
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response4

Writing Task

#Appointment Change
#Formal
You scheduled an appointment with a real estate agent to view a property, but you have another engagement.
Describe the other engagement.
Suggest a new date and time for the viewing.
Apologize for the inconvenience.

Submitted Answer

Words113|Paragraphs3
English:US English
Global Issues:
Word Count Requirement
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Good morning.
I hope this email finds you well.
i
´m contacting you because
i
need to change our scheduled
appoiment
.
yesterday
my sister
call
me to inform me that our that was extremely fragile in the hospital and no one can be with him today for the procedures, she
ask
me if
i
could do it.
i
know
i
already agreed to meet with you
but
since
its
a critical situation
i
hope we can change the
appoiment
for
friday
at ten am.
im
really sorry because
i
have to move everything and be a bit of an inconvenience for you.
best of the wishes,
i
will be waiting for your answer

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