IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5
5.0
Overall Score
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The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is basic and repetitive, and the letter could be more logically organized. The formality is mostly appropriate but could be improved with a better beginning and signature.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 24 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are planning a holiday with your friend. Write a letter to your friend.
Explain the destination you have chosen.
Suggest activities you can do there.
Ask for your friend's opinion on your plans.
#Holiday Plans
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:137
Paragraphs:3
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Vocabulary Usage
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Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Good day to you my
deasest
friend, I am planning to go on vacation
, but it will be great if you can join me in
this holiday. As you inform
me before that you dont
have any idea where you spend holiday's this summer. So, I think it will be better for both us to go in
France.I plan to go
in
Paris this coming summer to explore the beautiful city and specially to see personally the Eiffel tower. It will be nice to spend my evening together with you in the city of love, we can try a lot of nice restaurants.I'm considering your opinion
in
this trip. Let me know
if you have other plans. Please consider my offer
it
will be delightful that you can join me in
this vacation
.