IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5

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Overall Score
01 Aug 24, 20:13
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The letter addresses the main issue but lacks detail and structure. Grammar and vocabulary are basic, and the letter does not fully cover all the bullet points or maintain a semi-formal tone throughout.

Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response4.0
Total Errors20
Grammatical range and accuracy2
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response7
Question
You had an unpleasant experience during your recent stay at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager to express your dissatisfaction.
Describe the issues you encountered
Explain how these issues affected your stay
Suggest what the hotel could do to improve
#Hotel Reservation
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:US English
Words:100
Paragraphs:1
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Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Good day! I am writing this letter to report an issue that I recently experienced in our hotel. I have big expectations in this hotel because of the good reviews on the internet, which made me decide to book here. My stay here in your hotel
didn't
disappoint me, it has been
an amazing
experience, not until recently, I have experienced an issue inside our room. My shower
isn't
working
and
the heater
doesn't
work. I was stressed and
wasn't
able to take a bath. I hope this gets fixed as soon as possible. Thank you.