IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
5.0
Overall Score
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main issue but lacks detail and structure. Grammar and vocabulary are basic, and the letter does not fully cover all the bullet points or maintain a semi-formal tone throughout.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 7 |
Question
You had an unpleasant experience during your recent stay at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager to express your dissatisfaction.
Describe the issues you encountered
Explain how these issues affected your stay
Suggest what the hotel could do to improve
#Hotel Reservation
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:100
Paragraphs:1
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Good day! I am writing this letter to report an issue that I recently experienced in our hotel. I have big expectations in this hotel because of the good reviews on the internet, which made me decide to book here. My stay here in your hotel
didn't
disappoint me, it has been an amazing
experience, not until recently, I have experienced an issue inside our room. My shower isn't
working and
the heater doesn't
work. I was stressed and wasn't
able to take a bath. I hope this gets fixed as soon as possible. Thank you.