IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter covers the main points but lacks clarity and coherence due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Vocabulary is basic and repetitive, and the letter's structure could be improved for better logical flow.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 23 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are organizing a training session for new employees at your company. Write a letter to your manager to provide details about the session and request their approval.
Explain the purpose of the training session
Provide the date, time, and location
List the topics to be covered
Ask for the manager's approval
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Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:12
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Good day Boss,
I'm
requesting a training session for our new
employee
, Mr. Edward Burant on November 25, 2022, Time 10:00 AM and location
is at San Pablo Sector. Need your endorcement
email to the area
for entering of the new
employee
. Picking this
area
is we needed a
new
man power to this
area
, due to lots of
inqueries
, trouble reports and request reports to our
equipments
, PC, Telephone and etc. And some
area
need
to be
famillarize
to the
new
employee
.
Thus
there some new
offices and new
high employee
in the area
that didn't
know about our project. Please see below the list of topics.Here's the list of topics to be covered:
1. Replacing of PC
2. Troubleshooting of IP Phone
3. Configuration of IP Phone
4. Updating of OS
5. Checking of structured cabling
6. Introducing to the people in the
area
For your approval,
Sincerely,
Ma Sari Adan