IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 6
6.0
Overall Score
07 Aug 24, 09:45
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks a formal tone. Improved coherence and a more varied vocabulary would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are planning a vacation to celebrate your anniversary and need to request time off work. Write a letter to your manager.
Explain the importance of the anniversary
Provide the dates you would like to take off
Reassure your manager that your workload will not be affected
#Vacation Request
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:155
Paragraphs:7
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Good afternoon,
To who I may concern,
I hope this Email finds you well. My partner and I are about to fly to Indonesia for our
four year
anniversary. We have planned the trip
a while ago. In addition, our family willl
fly out as well to meet us a couple of days later. My Friend has organised
a booking for us in one of our favourite restaurant
in Indonesia.Our
Trip
starts on the second of august and will end on the sixteenth of august. I'm
requesting this time period of work, as this is really important for my Husband and our Family. I can assure you that my workload will not be affected at all. Any work required before my trip
I will reach the deadline.With my request, I
really
hope you understand the urgency and the personal importance of my Trip
and my time off request.Warmest regards,
Emma Watson