IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
02 Oct 24, 05:21
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but the letter could be more logically organized and polished in terms of vocabulary usage.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You have been receiving a monthly DIY magazine and it is time to renew your subscription. Write to the subscription office.
Express your interest in continuing the subscription.
Inquire about any new sections being added.
Ask for the renewal process.
#Subscription Renewal
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:155
Paragraphs:5
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Good Morning, DIY Magazine,
In terms of my monthly DIY
magazine
subscription
, It showed
that my subscription
is almost ended and
I would like to continue my subscription
. The reason of why I decided to extend my subscription
is because the contents of your DIY magazine
are really engaging and
I think it is suitable to
me.However, I also have some question about the
magazine
, would there be any new sections added to the Magazine
? If so, when they will
be released and is it possible
for me to get the
those new sections? Perhaps, you could inform me about the information before I continuing
my subscription
, in case I need to change my subscription
type to be able to get those new sections.Last, because I decided to extend my
subscription
to your magazine
, I would like to ask about the information of process for doing this renewal.Thank you and best regards.