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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)

5.5
Overall Score
09 Apr 25, 12:59
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but contains grammatical errors such as incorrect verb forms and spelling mistakes. Coherence and cohesion are maintained, but the letter could benefit from clearer organization and more varied vocabulary.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors19
Grammatical range and accuracy4
Lexical resource7
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response4

Writing Task

#Doctor Appointment
#Semi-Formal
You have been referred to a specialist by your general practitioner and need to schedule an appointment. Write a letter to the specialist's office.
Explain your referral and why you need to see the specialist
Ask about the availability for an appointment
Inquire about any necessary preparations or documents

Submitted Answer

Words107|Paragraphs6
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Word Count Requirement
Linking Devices
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Good Day.
I hope this letter finds you well. This is Alexandra Nicole Omotoy.
I'm
the patient of Dr.
Inigo
.
He's
my general
practioner
for a year. He was
reffered
you as my specialist.
I've
heard a lot of impressive reviews about
you
and I believe you can help me with my medical condition.
With this, I want to book an appointment with you. Can I ask what are your available schedule in this coming week?
Please, let
me know if
there is necessary preparations
or documents needed before the consultation day.
Thank you and hoping for immediate response.
Kind regards,
Alexandra Nicole Omotoy

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