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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5 (General Training)
7.5
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Overall Feedback
The letter is well-structured and addresses all the bullet points effectively. The grammar is accurate and varied, and the vocabulary is appropriate, though it could be more diverse. The coherence and cohesion are strong, but there is slight room for improvement in logical flow and vocabulary variety.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 2 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:270
Paragraphs:18
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Logical Flow
Emily Thompson
45 Oakwood Avenue
Brighton, BN1 2LB
emily.thompson@example.com
+44 7890 123456
24th August 2024
The Manager
Chapters
Bookstore
12 High Street
Brighton, BN1 1AB
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am writing to express my interest in the part-time position at your
bookstore
, as advertised in the local newspaper. I have always been passionate about books and literature, and I believe that this job would be an excellent opportunity for me to work
in an environment that aligns with my interests.I have previous experience
working
in retail, where I developed strong customer service skills and gained a good understanding of inventory management. In my previous role at PageTurners, I was responsible for assisting customers with their purchases, organizing shelves, and managing the checkout process. My ability to interact positively with customers and provide them with personalized recommendations would make me a valuable asset to your team.In addition to my retail experience, I am a quick learner and highly organized, which
I believe
are essential qualities for efficiently managing tasks in a busy bookstore
. My attention to detail and ability to work
under pressure will ensure that I can handle the responsibilities of this position effectively.I am available for an interview at your earliest convenience, and I am flexible with my
working
hours. I am confident that my skills and experience make me a suitable candidate for this position, and I am eager to contribute to Chapters Bookstore
's success.Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss how I can contribute to your team.
Yours sincerely,
Emily Thompson