IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
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14 Sept 24, 06:44
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The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have found a rental property that you are interested in and would like to inquire about the lease terms.
Provide details of the property you are interested in
Ask about the rental price and lease terms
Inquire about any additional costs or fees
#Rental Agreement
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:244
Paragraphs:7
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dera Mr. Perera,
I am writing
with reference to
the padvertisemnt
published on Ikman site regarding the three-bedroom house located in Maharagama, Nawinna area. The master bedroom and two attached bathrooms are eye-cathching
and the specias
garden gives a nice view to the entier
house. What I am mostly intrested
is that it has plenty of space for parking.Through this letter, I would like to inquire about the monthly fee and when are you expecting the rental to be paid. Same, whether its cash or an online transfer. When considering the rental terms and conditions, will you allow pets on the premises
.
In profession, I am running a small online bussiness
of gift Items. In that reason, I will have to utilize one room as the store and few of my assistants will be walking to my premisses to support me for packing. Kindly confirm me, whether this will also cover your terms and conditions.Additionally, I would like to know the process for paying monthly utility bills and the regular maintenance. Whether these costs will be born by the owner or I have to bear them. Paying utility bills is not an issue with me
but
I am specific about the maintenance costs. Kindly advice
me on the same. Further, I am keen to know about how many months of key money that you are expecting, if
to proceed further.Seeking for your favourable
responce
in this regardThanks
Binuki