IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
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The letter addresses all the required points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks proper punctuation. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the formality and structure could be improved for a higher score.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
You have decided to resign from your current job due to receiving a better job offer. Write a formal resignation letter.
State your intention to resign
Mention the reason for your resignation
Provide your last working day
Express gratitude for the opportunity
#Resignation Letter
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:124
Paragraphs:1
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear sir
reynold
, I am writing to formally resign from my position of being a deck cadet at BMC, for I was offered a better job from a different company It pains me that I have to resign, But I had no other choice for I really needed the extra income to support my family my last working day will be at 07/25/2024
and
I would really
love thank
you for giving me the opportunity to work and learn in your company.
I will never forget the kindness and understanding that you showed to me and for providing a comfortable working enviroment
and for that
I will forever be greatful
for everything. I sincerly
hope that you will have all the best.