IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
26 Jul 24, 18:29
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The letter addresses all the required tasks but contains several grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the vocabulary usage is somewhat limited and could be more varied to enhance the formality and clarity of the letter.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 15 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You purchased a piece of furniture, but it arrived damaged. Write to the furniture store to request a refund.
Describe the furniture you bought
Explain the damage
Request a refund
Ask about the return process
#Refund Request
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:93
Paragraphs:6
Word Count Requirement
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear sir/madam,
My name is Yassmeen, I purchased a blue
colored
L shape couch on the 19th of July. My furniture arrived to my address today but
it was damaged, it was scratche
from the sides and almost ripped from the middle. Therefore
I would like to return it . I would like to request a refund , so kindly repay my ampount
of 100 dolars
. i
would also like for you to send me information about the return process.Please find the attached copy of the payment receipt.
Thank you .
Sincerely,
Yassmeen Z.