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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task well, providing clear details about the trip and preferences. However, there are some grammatical errors and the vocabulary could be more varied. The coherence and cohesion are good, but the logical flow could be improved slightly.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 9 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You are planning a surprise birthday trip for a family member and need advice from a travel consultant. Write a letter to the consultant asking for recommendations and assistance.
Explain the purpose of the trip
Mention any specific preferences
Ask for recommendations on destinations and activities
#Travel Plans
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:166
Paragraphs:8
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Dear sir / madam
I am writing this letter to ask for any recommendations and assistance booking for a holiday destination outside of the country you would suggest
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take my friend for her 23rd birthday.A little bit about Lily and her taste that might give you an idea about what she likes. She is an extrovert, she likes going to the beach and she is very social. She enjoys partying but, she is a responsible drinker. As much as she might come across as a wild person, she is a responsible lady and safety is her main priority, so l would suggest somewhere with a tight security and trusted community.
I have invited other two friends to join us, and we are working on a very tight budget of around $3000- $4000. This includes all trip expenses: accommodations, flights and food.
I would greatly appreciate your expertise in making this trip very memorable for Lily.
I'm
looking forward to hearing from you.Regards
Britha