IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the tasks but contains several grammatical errors and lacks some coherence. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied. The formality is mostly appropriate, but the letter lacks a proper beginning and signature.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 23 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You need to have your home cleaned professionally. Write a letter to a cleaning service.
Describe your home and cleaning needs
Specify any particular areas that need attention
Inquire about costs and availability
#Service Request
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:131
Paragraphs:3
Word Count Requirement
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear service member,
I am signing up to inquire about hiring
profesional
cleaning service for my home. I would like assistance with regular household chores including furniture, sweeping, mopping floors and vacuum
carpets, cleaning windows, sanitizing bathrooms. Additionally
i
have certain areas that require particular attention, such as hardwood flooring, stainless steel
appliances, and fragile decorations. I want these items cleaned carefully using apropriate
productstand
techniques.Could you please provide me with more details regarding your fees? Do you charge per hour or do you offer package deals based on the amount of work required?
Furthuremore
, i
would appreciate
if you could inform me about your availability so that we can arrange a convenient time for the service. Please let me know if there are
additional informations
on that. Thank you