IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)

5.5
Overall Score
23 Jul 24, 05:15
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses all the tasks but contains several grammatical errors and lacks some coherence. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied. The formality is mostly appropriate, but the letter lacks a proper beginning and signature.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors23
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource7
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response3

Writing Task

#Service Request
#Formal
You need to have your home cleaned professionally. Write a letter to a cleaning service.
Describe your home and cleaning needs
Specify any particular areas that need attention
Inquire about costs and availability

Submitted Answer

Words131|Paragraphs3
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear service member,
I am signing up to inquire about hiring
profesional
cleaning service for my home. I would like assistance with regular household chores including furniture, sweeping, mopping floors and
vacuum
carpets, cleaning windows, sanitizing bathrooms.
Additionally
i
have certain areas that require particular attention, such as hardwood flooring,
stainless steel
appliances, and fragile decorations. I want these items cleaned carefully using
apropriate
productstand
techniques.
Could you please provide me with more details regarding your fees? Do you charge per hour or do you offer package deals based on the amount of work required?
Furthuremore
,
i
would
appreciate
if you could inform me about your availability so that we can arrange a convenient time for the service. Please let me know if there
are
additional
informations
on that. Thank you

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