IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
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The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are acceptable, but the vocabulary is limited and sometimes incorrect. The formality is mostly appropriate but could be improved with a more polished tone.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
Your children were playing loudly in the backyard and disturbed your neighbor. Write an apology letter.
Mention why the children were playing
Acknowledge the noise disturbance
Offer a solution to prevent future occurrences
#Neighbor Apology
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:92
Paragraphs:7
Word Count Requirement
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear neighbor
Last
friday
my childrens
were playing in the backyard, celebrating the end of the academic year with their friends.I was aware of the noises the caused, but at the same
time
it is something that is
not happening very often
. I was thrilled of joy as well, because they had a great year and they deserved have
fun.To prevent any
disconfort
, I would notify to the builing
manager to notify all the neighbors
if we are having any event.I
apologies
for any inconvinied
caused.Kind regards
Petra