IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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02 Apr 25, 05:56
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses all bullet points but lacks coherence and cohesion, with ideas not well-organized. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting clarity and formality not matching the semi-formal expectation.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors41
Grammatical range and accuracy20
Lexical resource11
Coherence & cohesion7
Task response3

Writing Task

#Moving Notice
#Informal
You have decided to move in with your partner. Write a letter to your sibling to inform them about your decision.
Explain the reason for moving in together
Describe the new living arrangements
Share your feelings about the move
Invite them to visit

Submitted Answer

Words235|Paragraphs6
English:UK English
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Dear my loved ones my brother and my sister,
i
want to thank you
guys
for helping me during these years I think
its
time
for me to move into my
new
place with Bella because
i
think
its
time
for us to challenge ourselves and see how we can manage our life and our life expenses and as we get
older
we need to make our own family with
bella
and
i
think
its
the right
time
.
The
new
house
that we rented
its
in a city and
its
absolutely beautiful and
cozy
for our start,
i
need your help to arrange a
time
for moving some of my stuff because
i
need some of them for our
house
.
i
feel
very happy, exited and at the mean
time
i
feel
anxious because as we move in into our
new
house
everything will be
change
because of the money and stuff like this but
i
feel
pretty good for it and
i
would like to enjoy this
new
journey with Bella and with you
guys
because
i
want you
guys
to be in this
new
part of my life.
please
feel
free to come and visit us and
i
will host a small party for our
new
house
and
i
would like you
guys
to join me
in
this party and have fun together and make salute for this
new
journey .
your brother
Yasin

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