IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 6
6.0
Overall Score
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but lacks coherence and cohesion. There are several grammatical errors and awkward phrases. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You borrowed a book from your friend and found it very helpful. Write a letter to thank your friend.
Thank them for lending you the book
Explain how the book was helpful
Mention how it has impacted you
#Thank You
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:97
Paragraphs:4
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Coherence
Cohesion
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Logical Flow
Dear my friend, thank you for lending me your book. I really find it interesting yet happy. I do appreciate it.
The book was really helpful to me, it has so many new
knowledges
and different perspectives. I also learned some new idioms that match my condition right now. It's like reading my whole life stories.I feel more relaxed and enjoyed my time because the book taught me how to love myself more, how to say no, how to deal with people, how to organize my emotion, and more.
Once again, thank you so much.