IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses all bullet points but lacks coherence and cohesion, with abrupt transitions between ideas. Grammar errors and limited vocabulary usage affect clarity and formality, which is not fully semi-formal.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors31
Grammatical range and accuracy9
Lexical resource15
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response3

Writing Task

#Thank You
#Semi-Formal
You recently received a gift from a colleague who helped you during a difficult time. Write a letter to thank them.
Express your gratitude for the gift
Explain how the gift is useful to you
Mention how their support helped you through the difficult time

Submitted Answer

Words171|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Dear my beloved friend,
i
recieved
this
good looking
gift seen
infront
of my main house door. You did not have to give me anything when
you're
always the one
helping
me out. I
can't
thank
you enough for this special gift. I
can't
thank
you enough for your kindness.
As soon as
i
opened it
i
was flabbergasted on how much
i
truly
need
this. I have been wanting to buy this in a store when I am available. This gift is now in good hands and
i
have fully taken good care of it. This has
helped
me
alot
when
i
need
to cook,
thank
you for this
amazing
pan.
I also cannot
thank
you enough
with
how much you have supported me all this time when
i
need
someone to
help
me
on
my difficult times. I
appriciate
all the help you have done for
me
from the smallest to the biggest help. I will also be sure to
help
you when you
need
some.

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