IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 6
6.0
Overall Score
21 Jul 24, 05:26
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary usage is somewhat limited and repetitive.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You recently had a meal delivered to your home and found it unsatisfactory. Write a letter to the food delivery service.
Describe the issues with your order
Explain how it affected your meal experience
Request a solution or compensation
#Service Feedback
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:107
Paragraphs:6
Word Count Requirement
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear manager
I recently visited your restaurant and ordered a lamb shank
meal
. I was very excited to try this meal
as I had read some good reviews about it online. However, when I tasked the meal
I found it to be very saulty
to the point where I could not eat it.This resulted in me having an unpleasant
meal
and leaving very dissapointed
. Could I please request that you offer me a refund or a coupon to enjoy a different meal
from the restaurant.
I look forward to
eharing
from you so that we can resolve this matter in an amicable way.Kind Regards
Olerato