IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5 (General Training)
7.5
Overall Score
11 Nov 24, 05:07
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the task, covering all bullet points, but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the coherence and cohesion could be improved with smoother transitions.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 9 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You want to take a vacation to participate in a sporting event. Write a letter to your employer requesting time off.
Describe the sporting event
Specify the dates of your planned vacation
Reassure your employer that your work will not be negatively impacted
#Vacation Request
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:182
Paragraphs:8
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Dear management,
Hope this letter finds you well.
I am writing to request days off from November 11th to November 15th due to the fact of my participation in a hockey competition.
I understand that I am asking for a week off, and not everyone in the office has this privilege. However, it will be greatly appreciated since the sporting event I am participating in is highly important for me and my personal goals. Being a part of this sports team is dramatically important for me and my performance at work. I can ensure, that work will not have any negative impact because I am on the top of my priority tasks. And also, I am ahead of the tasks we were discussing last week with the board of directors. Moreover, non-priority tasks are scheduled for next month, which gives me plenty of time and flexibility to complete it.
I have attached the claim, kindly let me know if you would like further discussion
and
please let me know your decision.Thank you in advance,
Waiting forward
for
your response.Xeniya