IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5 (General Training)

7.5

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11 Nov 24, 01:07

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The letter effectively addresses the task, covering all bullet points, but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the coherence and cohesion could be improved with smoother transitions.

Overall score	7.5
Grammatical range and accuracy	7.0
Lexical resource	7.0
Coherence & cohesion	7.0
Task response	8.0

Writing Task

#Vacation Request

#Semi-Formal

You want to take a vacation to participate in a sporting event. Write a letter to your employer requesting time off.

Describe the sporting event

Specify the dates of your planned vacation

Reassure your employer that your work will not be negatively impacted

Submitted Answer

Words182|Paragraphs8

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Dear management,

Hope this letter finds you well.

I am writing to request days off from November 11th to November 15th due to the fact of my participation in a hockey competition.

I understand that I am asking for a week off, and not everyone in the office has this privilege. However, it will be greatly appreciated since the sporting event I am participating in is highly important for me and my personal goals. Being a part of this sports team is dramatically important for me and my performance at work. I can ensure, that work will not have any negative impact because I am on the top of my priority tasks. And also, I am ahead of the tasks we were discussing last week with the board of directors. Moreover, non-priority tasks are scheduled for next month, which gives me plenty of time and flexibility to complete it.

I have attached the claim, kindly let me know if you would like further discussion

and

please let me know your decision.

Thank you in advance,

Waiting forward

for

your response.

Xeniya

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Total Errors	9
Grammatical range and accuracy	3
Lexical resource	2
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	1