IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
13 Jul 24, 07:51
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but the logical flow could be improved. Vocabulary usage is adequate but lacks variety and sophistication.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You misplaced your scarf in a library. Write a letter to the library manager.
Describe the scarf and its significance
Explain the circumstances under which you lost it
Ask if they have a lost and found box
#Lost Item
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:153
Paragraphs:6
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear madam or sir,
I am Alex, the one that visited the library yesterday. I
tnink
that I forgot to my scarf
where I placed it before. As I remembered
I visited your library yesterday and I left it there. I was sitting in a sofa in front of the first bookshelf around internet area.The
scarf
is made of wool, it has stripped
pattern, and it has red and blue colour with a smile emoticon on the corner of the scarf
. it
was given by my grandmother, so I would be sad if I lost it.If you find my
scarf
in your library, please to
keep it up. I would pick it up next week because I have got free time
at that time. I hope it around there and you keep it. I do apologize as I burden you due to my scarf
. Thank you so much.Your sincerely,
Alex