IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5

5.5
Overall Score
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The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but the logical flow could be improved. Vocabulary usage is adequate but lacks variety and sophistication.

Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response4.0
Total Errors17
Grammatical range and accuracy4
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response4
Question
You misplaced your scarf in a library. Write a letter to the library manager.
Describe the scarf and its significance
Explain the circumstances under which you lost it
Ask if they have a lost and found box
#Lost Item
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:153
Paragraphs:6
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear madam or sir,
I am Alex, the one that visited the library yesterday. I
tnink
that I forgot to my
scarf
where I placed it before. As I
remembered
I visited your library yesterday and I left it there. I was sitting in a sofa in front of the first bookshelf around internet area.
The
scarf
is made of wool, it has
stripped
pattern, and it has red and blue colour with a smile emoticon on the corner of the
scarf
.
it
was given by my grandmother, so I would be sad if I lost it.
If you find my
scarf
in your library,
please to
keep it up. I would pick it up next week because I have got
free time
at that time. I hope it around there and you keep it. I do apologize as I burden you due to my
scarf
. Thank you so much.
Your sincerely,
Alex