IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
5.0
Overall Score
06 Aug 24, 10:28
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Overall Feedback
The letter shows interest in the workshop but lacks detailed inquiries about the types of cuisine, mode of instruction, and registration process. Grammar and vocabulary are basic with several errors, and the structure needs improvement for better coherence and cohesion.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 27 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 7 |
Question
You found an online advertisement for a cooking workshop that you are interested in attending. Write to the organizers for more information.
State your interest in learning cooking
Ask about the types of cuisine that will be covered
Inquire about the mode of instruction (online or in-person)
Request details about the registration process
#Workshop Inquiry
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:94
Paragraphs:1
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Dear
maa
'm/sir
i
saw your advertisement online and i
am so amazed and intersted
. i
am Jefrey Daguman from Cebu City
Philipphines a culinary graduate and have 1 year experience in cooking
. I want to expand my learning about cooking
and i
think it will help me a lot if i
will attend your workshop . Kindly send me more information and details about the cooking
workshop. Hoping that i
will be part of that cooking
workshop someday. thank
you so much and more power to your company. God bless and be safe.