IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5

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06 Aug 24, 10:28
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The letter shows interest in the workshop but lacks detailed inquiries about the types of cuisine, mode of instruction, and registration process. Grammar and vocabulary are basic with several errors, and the structure needs improvement for better coherence and cohesion.

Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response4.0
Total Errors27
Grammatical range and accuracy10
Lexical resource4
Coherence & cohesion5
Task response7
Question
You found an online advertisement for a cooking workshop that you are interested in attending. Write to the organizers for more information.
State your interest in learning cooking
Ask about the types of cuisine that will be covered
Inquire about the mode of instruction (online or in-person)
Request details about the registration process
#Workshop Inquiry
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:94
Paragraphs:1
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear
maa
'm/
sir
i
saw your advertisement online and
i
am so amazed and
intersted
.
i
am Jefrey Daguman from Cebu
City
Philipphines a culinary graduate and have 1 year experience in
cooking
. I want to expand my learning about
cooking
and
i
think it will help me a lot if
i
will attend your workshop . Kindly send me more information and details about the
cooking
workshop. Hoping that
i
will be part of that
cooking
workshop someday.
thank
you so much and more power to your company. God bless and be safe.