IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)

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19 Mar 25, 00:17
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The letter addresses all tasks but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. Vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety, and coherence could be improved with better logical flow and paragraphing.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response6.0
Total Errors6
Grammatical range and accuracy1
Lexical resource1
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response1

Writing Task

#Property Inquiry
#Semi-Formal
You have seen an advertisement for an apartment that meets your needs. Write a letter to the landlord to inquire about the property.
mention where you saw the advertisement
describe the apartment you are interested in
ask about the rental price and lease terms
inquire about the neighborhood

Submitted Answer

Words227|Paragraphs9
English:UK English
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Dear landlord,
I am writing to express my interest in your flat which was located near the 113 street NW in Calgray.
I saw your advertisements on the social media application when I was safariing the internet. My old home had been suitable to me, until the property manager rose the rent without any notification.
I am looking for on a place where I could have my own underground parking place, which allows my vehicle to stay away from the snow and ice in winter. Because last winter, I suffered from turning on my car on every morning. In addition to that, a sharing car wash in the common area would be even better, as you know, cars can never be clean in this province with the mud on the road.
I would appreciate it if you can send me the price and other leasing details to me. Hence, I did not check the renting agreements clearly last time, so I have to make sure it will not happen twice.
Furthermore, It could be helpful if you can introduce the community to me,such as where is the closest shopping centre and playground? So I can fit in this neighbourhood quicker.
If there is anything you need from me, please do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Oliver

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