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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary is limited and sometimes incorrectly used, impacting the overall readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 14 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Property Inquiry
#Semi-Formal
You have seen an advertisement for an apartment that meets your needs. Write a letter to the landlord to inquire about the property.
mention where you saw the advertisement
describe the apartment you are interested in
ask about the rental price and lease terms
inquire about the neighborhood
Submitted Answer
Words191|Paragraphs9
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Dear landlord,
I am writing to express my
interes
about your apartments
which were located near the 113 st
nw
in Calgray.I saw your advertisements on the social media application when I was
safaring
the internet. My old home had been suitable to me, until the property manager rose the rent without any notification.I am finding a place where I have
a
own underground parking lot
, which allow my car to stays away from the snow and frozen ice
in winter. Becasue
last winter, I suffered from turnning
on my car on every morning.I would appreciate it if you can send me the price and other leasing details to me. Hence, I
didn't
check the last apartment
agreements clearly, so I have to make sure it will not happen twice.Furthermore, It could be helpful if you can introduce the community to me,such as where is the closest shopping centre and playground? So I can fit in this
neighborhood
quicker.If there is anything you need from me, please
don't
hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,
Oliver