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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)

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The letter addresses the task but contains grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and coherence and cohesion could be improved with better logical flow and paragraphing.

Overall score	6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	6.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	6.0

Writing Task

#Landlord Issue

#Formal

The landlord of your rented house has recently increased the rent without any prior notice. You find this increase unfair and would like to address the issue formally.

State the unexpected rent increase

Explain why you think the increase is unfair

Propose a solution or compromise

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Dear landlord,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the recent ascend in my

apartment

rent on last month.

Before I joined this community, the property manager made a promise to me that there will not be any increase on the monthly rent until the end of my first year contract. That is the reason why I am so surprised with this unexpected inflation.

Although the residents in this community are all kind and helpful, the common properties are much below my expectation. The gym equipment is too less to allow more than two people to work out together. In addition, the swim pool

broken since

have moved into this building; therefore, I do not think this raising is reasonable compared to this negative management.

It might be helpful if your management group can spend some time maintaining the sharing activity rooms and show the progress, as a

result

I will be willing to accept this price shifting.

If there is anything you require from me, please contact me as soon as possible to the following Email: 11111@gmail.com. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Oliver

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