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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is limited and there are issues with formality and structure, affecting the overall readability and effectiveness of the letter.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 25 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Writing Task
#Landlord Issue
#Formal
The landlord of your rented house has recently increased the rent without any prior notice. You find this increase unfair and would like to address the issue formally.
State the unexpected rent increase
Explain why you think the increase is unfair
Propose a solution or compromise
Submitted Answer
Words189|Paragraphs8
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Dear landlord,
I am writing this letter
the
express my dissatisfaction about recent
ascend in my apartment
rent on last month.Before I joined this community, the property manager made a promise to me
about
there won't
be any increase on the monthly rent until the end of my first year contract. That is the reason why I am so surprised with this unexpected inflation.Although the residents in this community are all kind and helpful, the common properties are much below my
expection
. The gym equipents
are
too less to allow more than two people to workout
together. In addition, the swim pool is broken since i
have moved in
this building; therefore, I don't
think this raising are
resonable
compare
to your negative management.I believe if your management group can spend more time
to maintain
the sharing activity rooms and show the progress, all unit owner
can accept this price shifting.If there is anything you require from me, please contact me as soon as possible to the following Email: 11111@gmail.com. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Oliver