IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
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28 Jul 24, 06:20
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise. The formality is mostly appropriate for a semi-formal letter.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are organizing a surprise anniversary gathering for your parents. Write a letter to your close friend inviting them to the event.
Explain the occasion
Share the date and venue
Mention any gift ideas
#Anniversary Invitation
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Words:110
Paragraphs:6
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Dear friends
The reason
of
this letter it is to invite you to the 50 years aniversary
of my beloved parents.We will be thrilled to have you in this special
ocation
, because
you've been there in their journey and shared special moments with them.The event will be Saturday the 5th of April at Rosbery avenue local #5
Your presence will be their biggest gift, but if you are keen to give them a present, We will leave
a a
box at the entrance of the venue where you can place a card sharing the special moments you remember of their 50 years of love.
See you soon