IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 7
7.0
Overall Score
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The letter addresses all the bullet points and maintains a semi-formal tone. However, there are minor grammatical errors and the vocabulary could be more varied. The coherence and cohesion are good but could be improved with better transitions.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You were supposed to help your friend move to a new house but couldn't make it. Write an apology letter to your friend.
Explain why you couldn't help with the move.
Apologize for letting your friend down.
Offer to help with something else as compensation.
#Apology Letter
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Words:101
Paragraphs:3
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Dear friend,
I'm writing this letter to you to apologize for not being able to help you move today, my grandmother has asked me to take her to the eye doctor today, she hasn't been able to see clearly since yesterday.
I'm very sorry I won't be able to help you move today. If you need help with anything after you've moved into your new home, don't hesitate to ask me for help! I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
maybe
we could go out for lunch next week! Let's schedule a lunch date.