IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
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21 Mar 25, 19:47
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the task with a warm tone and covers all bullet points, but contains minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Vocabulary is varied but could be more precise, and coherence is slightly affected by informal expressions.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 15 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Writing Task
#Graduation Congratulations
#Informal
A family friend has graduated with a degree in their chosen field. Write a letter to congratulate them.
Express your warm congratulations.
Talk about the importance of their achievement.
Mention how you have always believed in their capabilities.
Submitted Answer
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Dear friend:
I am writing this letter to congratulate you
for
your latest achievement, your graduation! This could not make me happier
and seeing such a close friend accomplishing such a great thing as getting a degree, has motivated me to keep up the good work and hard studying!Don't be afraid to stop by our house at any moment. We'll make sure to
recieve
you with the warmest of welcomes but with tons of questions, of course!Some people tend to oversee getting a degree as something simple, but I am not that kind of person.
it
definitely is paving
your future and giving
you tons of opportunities, who seemed to be nothing but simple fairytales in the past. With this degree not even the sky is the limit now! You could meet new horizons and all kinds of different people, but please don't forget about us simple mortals when your friends list is higher than the Rockefeller tree!Of course, this is no surprise to me as I have always believed in your capabilities. When we first met, the first thought that went through my mind was ''Could this be the new Albert Einstein?'' since you being capable of achieving great things was something I already knew by then.
I am hoping that this is just the first of the many achievements you will accomplish in the future. Seeing you being recognized as an enormously high-achieving person in a soon-to-be future has never been easier
!
Sincerely,
Axel S.