IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but lacks detail and clarity. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, and the letter should be more cohesive and coherent to enhance readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 26 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 7 |
Question
You used a travel booking website for the first time and had a mixed experience. Write a letter to your friend describing what happened.
Describe the website and what you booked
Explain both the positive and negative aspects of the experience
Share your thoughts on whether you would use the site again
#Travel Booking
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:124
Paragraphs:5
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Dear friend,
Hope you are doing well.
Its
been a long time since i
saw you,.
Today i
am writing this letter to share my recent experience with a website i
used for my recent flight booking to edmonton
named as flair.com. I have a mixed feeling regarding their service as they offered me a good deal
but
they were unable to provide me the boarding passes for my
apple wallet
which was a bit
inconvinient
which cause a
huga wait
in the boarding
que
.
I was happy and sad at the same time
not fully satisfied with their service. Seems like i
won't be using that website again. Just wanted to share my feedback with you.Regards,
Your beloved friend,
Kirti