IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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The letter addresses the task but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is limited and there are issues with formality and structure, affecting the overall readability and cohesion.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors21
Grammatical range and accuracy7
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response4

Writing Task

#Graduation Congratulations
#Informal
A friend has graduated with a degree in nursing. Write a letter to congratulate them on their success.
Congratulate them on their graduation.
Discuss the challenges they overcame.
Mention your hopes for their bright future.

Submitted Answer

Words156|Paragraphs5
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear, friend
Congratulation, you finally made it! I know you've been
struggleing
in the past year
and
I am so proud of you because you show your
credibelity
to everyone and your parents as well.
However, this is not the end. This is the first journey of your life, there will be so much
challanges
in the future. You might now worry
and anxious
, but I am here for you. I believe you can go through and facing the real life experiences.
Nurse is tough, people are
agree
as well. But, the money is
good
, so it is worth. You made the
best
desicision
in your life
for
become
a nurse.
I am really hoping that you could be the
best
nurse, and the most important thing is that you need to keep calm and control your emotion. Your physic and mental health are
important more
than anything. Once again, I wish you the
best
!

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