IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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The letter addresses the main points but lacks coherence and cohesion, with abrupt transitions and unclear connections. Grammar errors and limited vocabulary affect clarity and formality, while the letter lacks a proper beginning and signature.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors25
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion5
Task response5

Writing Task

#Apology Letter
#Informal
You were supposed to help your friend move to a new house but couldn't make it. Write an apology letter to your friend.
Explain why you couldn't help with the move.
Apologize for letting your friend down.
Offer to help with something else as compensation.

Submitted Answer

Words94|Paragraphs1
English:UK English
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear friend, Accept my apologies for not coming to help you
finding
a new house, This is because I had my car stalled and not working any more
so
I had
to to
tow the car and repair it at the nearest workshop, The
maintainance
will take at least three days, But as a compensation, I will make a reservation in high-end
resturant
to
have a dinner
and keep
continue
in your new house discussion.
I am very sorry for
that to happen
but
you know that
consequnces
happens
. Have a
great
day.

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