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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. The coherence and cohesion are hindered by abrupt transitions and lack of smooth flow, while vocabulary usage is limited and repetitive.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 19 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Writing Task
#Appointment Change
#Formal
You have a meeting with a career counselor, but you need to change the date due to an unexpected event.
Explain the unexpected event.
Propose a new date and time for the meeting.
Express your apologies for any inconvenience.
Submitted Answer
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Dear
counselor
,I writing this letter to inquire about a time
shiftment
about my career appointment with you at 11 am on Friday.Yesterday, When I was driving from university to home, I lost the control of my car's wheels, as a result, my car fell in to the ditch. Although, there
are
no damaged caused to my head or body, my arm are
broken. Doctor told me I need to stay in the hospital for a couple of days to check the ability of my arm, therefore
I am not able to attend the meeting at tomorrow.I know this month is the graduation month, and your appointment is fully reserved
till
the second Friday on
April. I would like to book another meeting with you on April 9th.Lastly, please accept my sincere apologies for the time
changment
about my meeting.If there is anything you would want me to know, feel free to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully.
Oliver